
There was a laddy, out on a quest,
With a black ink bottle, and a cuckoo in the nest.
A well crafted map, a pepper spray in hand,
He set out to marry, a princess very grand.
Two beautiful women, on his path he met,
Truth & Falsity, is how their names were set.
“Hello young man, if yonder you must go”,
“Craft us cloaks such that, only our souls they’d show.”
“If the cloaks show, any more than that,
Your head we shall cut, like a sewer rat.
Understand us women, understand us now,
Or your dreams of marrying her, will be smashed and how!”
The laddy was wicked, he knew what to do,
The pepper spray can he sprayed, on flowers twenty two.
The pollen now randomly falling, caused the flowers to mate,
Stood in the place of 22, now flowers 288.
The flowers he took, and turned them into a cloak,
Smeared on it the black ink, and let the ink soak.
He gifted it to Falsity, to pass the acid test,
To Truth he handed the map, and the cuckoo in the nest.
“Falsity this black cloak, is the falsehood you can wear,
Since you always lie, your soul you do not share.
The only soul the hood will reveal, is the sole of your feet,
That way men can be wary of you, and beat a fast retreat.
“Truth your soul is naked, a cloak you do not need,
Use the map for the paths, to Falsity do not pay any heed.
The cuckoo in the nest, you can now wipe out,
Troubles gone, for the true soul, men would not have to scout.”
Hearing this Truth and Falsity, dissolved into one,
And stood in their place The Princess of rhymes, words and pun.
“You are honest and shrewd, and you are rather wise,
You’ve understood a woman’s mind, you’ll get your prize.”
“A woman in my kingdom, wants a man such,
One for whom literal meanings, don’t hold meanings much.
Idioms he should understand, read between the lines,
Trap the woman in her own words, interpret all her signs.”
“Naked Truth and Falsehood, together make us women,
Each with her own moods, and each in her own den.
A woman and her wants, mostly need humour and wit,
Come I shall marry you, my groom to be you’re fit.”
(This post was written in response to this BlogAdda contest http://blog.blogadda.com/2010/06/23/what-women-want-indian-bloggers-share conducted in partnership with Pringoo.com)







Beautiful, Absolutely beautiful… I just finished reading “the palace of illusions” by Chitra bannerjee, and that too is pretty much about the truth and lies that make a woman…
Awesome work shreya.
Dude! Super fast! I don’t think we finished proof reading the post also
lol! U put on fb max… so!
Ohh! That bloody RSS feed no. On the last rebus post it took 5 days to put on FB. Now it does in less than a minute. Weird!
Thank you so much!
I’ll try and get hold of the book now then, especially since I’m pretty jobless at the moment.
Awesome..
Thanks Akshay
Very nice indeed …
Let us know what happened in the contest!
Cheers
Thank you. The contest was just an inspiration since I had not blogged for a long time.
wah wah!!
WOW!! Awesome piece you’ve written over here!
Thanks for the appreciation! Glad you like it
Gaaawd! Shreya, you are terrific !! you have described a woman in a beautiful nutshell !! Hats off to u !!
excellent…
whoa… this is so damn gud…amazed!!
@Rashmi: Thank you girl
. Good to know a woman appreciating this 
@Archit, Ayush: Thank you so much!
@Ma: You spoil me.
I really enjoy the 2nd to last stanza…it hits home for me.
loved every bit of ur composition.all d very best.:)
my god shreya…..tera jwaab nahi!!!!
Congratulations, Shreya ! Wonderful post ….
Brilliant work! Enjoyed it a lot
Hey Shreya – You Won! Congratulations. Awesome work!
@Kerry: good to hear it hits home for you
And Thank you.
@dpa, bharu, Nikhil: Thank you so much!
@Rama: Congratulations to you too!
Very gud way to put across the fact that women look for wit in a man!
Wit is just one thing. But rather important
Thank you sirji!
Jhakaas.
*I am tired of saying awesome here*
Coming from you, well it feels good
. I’ve been following your blog, so Thank you.
That’s brilliant..
WOW!
Im glad I popped in for a read. Congratulations on the win. Much deserved it was, having read this so. Summing this subject into a poem with a story, in my opinion, is no easy feat, and uve done a crafty job on it!
Kudos
First thank you for popping in for a read. I enjoy telling stories through poetry, so I loved doing this. I like this so much now, that I’ve quite forgotten how to write a simple story
ha ha… well so long as ur story telling does nothing but keep us hooked, it dont matter what written medium u use!
Keep sharing!
Congrats. Its amazing how you used poetry here. Loved it.
Thank you!
Shreya………u r sooooo good.The piece is one of a kind and is awesome. I enjoyed reading every word of it. Keep posting!
My poetry definitely needs a lot of improvement. I try with every post. But thanks for all the encouragement!
Beautiful poetry, Shreya. Definitely the best I’ve read in quite a while.
You have not only described perfectly what women would want, but also taught men how to understand them.
All the best with the competition.
Woah. Thank you! The contest’s over though
Won
But understanding women is difficult. I don’t understand me.
Congratulations, then!
And yeah, though your poem might simplify things only a little, I don’t understand this unique ’species’ either! Cheers that you’re all unique and quite incomprehensible!
I got on to the interwebs after so long and I find this. It’s beautiful. I’m already mailing it to people.
Oh, I’m glad you liked it. You’re far too kind. And you’re mailing it to people? I’m simply overwhelmed.
And this is the first time you comment on our blog? Thank you
Awesome work Shreya…very impressive.
Thanks Aditya!
The poem is actually philosophical too – it implies that truth and falsehood are one and the same! This might apply to almost everything including the woman. You have good poetry writing skills, I must admit!
Destination Infinity
Well, the poem actually is open to interpretation. I have heard quite a few interpretations now, and it is interesting to see what people bring out of it.
And thank you for your comment and appreciation! It surely is very encouraging
Beautiful, just BEAUTIFUL!!! And spot on! I had started writing a post for this contest but it turned out to be the standard “I want respect, I want freedom” rant so I stopped. NO ONE could have said it better than you!
Oh you are too kind! Thank you very much
dear shreya…….loved the style! congratulations…….
Mashi! Thank you for reading, and commenting!
A masterpiece, I must say.
I don’t read much poetry but this is surely one of the most interesting poems I’ve ever read. No wonder you won the contest.
wow…thats amazing….good aye